Also this is what were doing for online school (Today)
The Steps to a Six sentence story
1. The First Sentence starts with "Once a pon a time" Then you introduce your main character
2. The Second Sentence is describing where the character lived
3. describes their special talent
4.Describes the characters problem
5. Why they felt that why
6. how they solved the problem
Hi Shiloh
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great way to write a story. Thanks for sharing yours with us. I enjoyed reading it.
I really like watching the carpool karaokes with James Cordon, they are always great!
That would be a fun thing to do in your class! You could have classroom karaoke with Whaea Katie!!
I am sure she could makes some jokes on it for you!!
I hope you are keeping busy at home. I look forward to reading more of your work while we all work from home!
Talk again soon
Mrs Costello :)
Kia ora Shilo, Your story is about the boy band you like and know lots about. It is good to write about what you know well. I like the addition of the images. I look forward to learning more about the band!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Shiloh,
ReplyDeleteKei te phea koe?
How are you finding Learning from Home?
I like your BTS dumpling story. I love dumplings but am not a big fan of BTS. I have to admit that Burn The Stage is a pretty good name though. Even when I lived in Japan I never got into J-Pop or K-Pop. What do you like about them? Who is your favourite member of the group?
See you again soon,
Mrs Gully
Hello, shiloh here, I like how much talent they have and how they worked so hard., etc and my favourite member would be taehyung
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