I liked the way you linked your poster to your blog and made sure people could get onto it. A lot of the time people don't realize they need to share it otherwise the people seeing their blog can't see it.
When I read your post I learnt that you know how to link things and share them, that you know how to make a quality blog post, and that you know how to make a pretty interesting title, well done. 😉
To improve, you could try not to cover up the background with other pictures, I can't see what the background says, though I have a good idea of what it says.
Question time! Why did you make a poster about being an upstander? What do YOU think you could do to improve? Why do you have pictures stacked on top of each other?
Goodbye Shiloh! See you in your next blog post. Please reply as I worked hard to write this comment. 😊
Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you linked your poster to your blog and made sure people could get onto it. A lot of the time people don't realize they need to share it otherwise the people seeing their blog can't see it.
When I read your post I learnt that you know how to link things and share them, that you know how to make a quality blog post, and that you know how to make a pretty interesting title, well done. 😉
To improve, you could try not to cover up the background with other pictures, I can't see what the background says, though I have a good idea of what it says.
Question time!
Why did you make a poster about being an upstander?
What do YOU think you could do to improve?
Why do you have pictures stacked on top of each other?
Goodbye Shiloh! See you in your next blog post. Please reply as I worked hard to write this comment. 😊
-Amelia