I loved this because you have adorable animals that are all cute and majestic. The animals are probably my favorite part, I love animals a lot as you can see!
This reminded me of when everyone had to do mauri in the place were Kelly Club is now held. Kelly Club is an after school program that you have to pay for. I didn't like mauri and we get to choose if we want to do it or not now so I don't.
Make sure you have interesting backgrounds next time, I always do. But then again I usually don't have interesting titles so don't worry too much about them. Your title is pretty good anyways but could still use some work though.
Why don't other members of your class have new posts? Why did you do this blog post about animals?
Goodbye Shiloh, can't wait to see another one of your amazing posts!
Kia ora Shiloh! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way you revealed the names for the animals on the next slide! It sort of makes you want to read more in a way.
I've been learning Te Reo Maori. I've also joined Kapa Haka! It's really fun!
Next time, maybe you could have a translation somewhere on what the Te Reo Maori says.
Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI loved this because you have adorable animals that are all cute and majestic. The animals are probably my favorite part, I love animals a lot as you can see!
This reminded me of when everyone had to do mauri in the place were Kelly Club is now held. Kelly Club is an after school program that you have to pay for. I didn't like mauri and we get to choose if we want to do it or not now so I don't.
Make sure you have interesting backgrounds next time, I always do. But then again I usually don't have interesting titles so don't worry too much about them. Your title is pretty good anyways but could still use some work though.
Why don't other members of your class have new posts?
Why did you do this blog post about animals?
Goodbye Shiloh, can't wait to see another one of your amazing posts!
-Amelia
Kia ora Shiloh! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way you revealed the names for the animals on the next slide! It sort of makes you want to read more in a way.
ReplyDeleteI've been learning Te Reo Maori. I've also joined Kapa Haka! It's really fun!
Next time, maybe you could have a translation somewhere on what the Te Reo Maori says.
From Hana
I like your blog and I like animals I have 6 animals I have 2 dogs and 4 cats I hop you like my comment.
ReplyDeletehello thanks i have 13 animals i have most of my animals at my dads
DeleteKia Ora Shiloh,I am Alvin from Yaldhurst Model School,
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a fantastic blog post!
you should say what kind of rabbits are they
and what kind of wolfs are they?
how many are there? becasue you siad how many not what are they.?
its cool
ReplyDeleteits not cool its amazing.
Deletethe work is really awsome on your blog
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