Hello Shiloh! I am Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,
You are so lucky to be using smarties for maths! I wish that we were allowed to use smarties for maths, actually,no, people would eat them- Anyway,I really like how you decided to take a picture of what you were doing, it helped me to figure out how you did fractions using those delicious... Luscious... Sweet smarti- Sorry about that, anyway, it would be great if you could work on adding more description on what you did, because, no offense, but I feel that the picture described more than what you wrote down. Did you get to eat any of the Smarties?
Hey Shiloh, I am Lucy from Yaldhurst Model school, I am year 5.
It must be so fun using smarties in math. I like how you told us what you were learning about. I do have to say that you could have writen a little more at the top of the page. Did you get to eat them after? I hope you did. Next time write a little more on how you felt about this. But overall I love this blog post
Kia ora Shiloh, My name is Rhys and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School. I love the way you took a picture of your work! Like Sam said, It made it easier to understand what you were doing!. I've had smarties before but I never Really liked them but judging by what Sam said, it seems like they taste better than I thought. Maybe next time you could add a little more about why you posted this on your blog. Like Sam said did you get to eat any of the smarties?.
Hi shiloh I'm Toby from YMS I like took a picture of your work because it was confusing if you just put the words but it's more clear. It reminded me of when I had to put work on my blog. Next time you should add more writing?
Hey Shiloh, I am Delilah from Yaldhurst Model school, I am year 5.
It must be so fun using smarties in math. I like how you told us what you were learning about. I do have to say that you could have written a little more at the top of the page. Did you get to eat them after? I hope you did. Next time write a little more on how you felt about this. But overall I love this blog post
Hi Shiloh I really like you blog post Next time could you please explain what you had to do. After did you get to eat the smarties? If you did were they yum? Kind regards Kade
Kia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way you added colourful colours of smarties. The facts you used are really good. I like the colour blue, pink and purple. How come you thought to put Smarties for your fractions.
Kia ora Shiloh! My name is Ethan from yaldhurst model school I like the way you've showed your thing. But next time could you please tell us how you did it and why you did it? But otherwise it was a good blog.
Hi Shiloh, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu. I love what you did I wish that we could do something like that in our class because it would be fun and tasty. Kind regards, Bella
Kia Ora my name is Ethan from YMS it is a good blog It is a good blog because the words have lots of information about the thing that you have done. Did you know that fractions are a good thing to your life.
kia,ora my name is connor. I enjoy the part when we have all those cool colours I like the way how you got it I did it too. why did you do this. from Connor
Hello Shiloh! I am Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,
ReplyDeleteYou are so lucky to be using smarties for maths! I wish that we were allowed to use smarties for maths, actually,no, people would eat them- Anyway,I really like how you decided to take a picture of what you were doing, it helped me to figure out how you did fractions using those delicious... Luscious... Sweet smarti- Sorry about that, anyway, it would be great if you could work on adding more description on what you did, because, no offense, but I feel that the picture described more than what you wrote down. Did you get to eat any of the Smarties?
Happy Blogging!
Sam
Hey Shiloh, I am Lucy from Yaldhurst Model school, I am year 5.
ReplyDeleteIt must be so fun using smarties in math. I like how you told us what you were learning about. I do have to say that you could have writen a little more at the top of the page. Did you get to eat them after? I hope you did. Next time write a little more on how you felt about this. But overall I love this blog post
Keep up the good work!
- Kind regards
From Lucy
Yes we did eat them after,well after school and i will work on writing more.!
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Hi there Shiloh! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWow! I like the way you took a picture of your work! Like Sam said, It made it easier to understand what you were doing!
I haven't tried smarties before, but judging by what Sam said, it seems like they taste pretty good!
Maybe next time you could add a little more about why you posted this on your blog.
And like Sam said, did you get to eat any of the smarties?
Form Hana.
Kia ora Shiloh,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rhys and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I love the way you took a picture of your work! Like Sam said, It made it easier to understand what you were doing!.
I've had smarties before but I never Really liked them but judging by what Sam said, it seems like they taste better than I thought.
Maybe next time you could add a little more about why you posted this on your blog.
Like Sam said did you get to eat any of the smarties?.
Kind regards
Rhys
yes i did,i also shared with my little sister! and i will work on that
DeleteHi shiloh I'm Toby from YMS
ReplyDeleteI like took a picture of your work because it was confusing if you just put the words but it's more clear. It reminded me of when I had to put work on my blog. Next time you should add more writing?
Yours sincerely
Toby
Nice joby tobby I realy lik your coment
DeleteHey Shiloh, I am Delilah from Yaldhurst Model school, I am year 5.
ReplyDeleteIt must be so fun using smarties in math. I like how you told us what you were learning about. I do have to say that you could have written a little more at the top of the page. Did you get to eat them after? I hope you did. Next time write a little more on how you felt about this. But overall I love this blog post
Keep up the good work!
KIND REGARDS -Delilah
thanks
DeleteHi Shiloh
ReplyDeleteI really like you blog post
Next time could you please explain what you had to do.
After did you get to eat the smarties?
If you did were they yum?
Kind regards
Kade
Kia ora, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the way you added colourful colours of smarties. The facts you used are really good. I like the colour blue, pink and purple. How come you thought to put Smarties for your fractions.
ReplyDeleteRegards, Zahrah :)
Kia ora Shiloh! My name is Ethan from yaldhurst model school I like the way you've showed your thing. But next time could you please tell us how you did it and why you did it? But otherwise it was a good blog.
ReplyDeleteBye for now Ethan
Hi Shiloh, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI love what you did I wish that we could do something like that in our class because it would be fun and tasty.
Kind regards,
Bella
Kia Ora my name is Ethan from YMS it is a good blog It is a good blog because the words have lots of information about the thing that you have done. Did you know that fractions are a good thing to your life.
ReplyDeletekia,ora my name is connor.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the part when we have all those cool colours I like the way how you got it I did it too.
why did you do this.
from Connor